PJ-Olzow's Reviews

['Kite']

Awesome Job

I don't know if this has been mentioned yet, but one of the strengths to this film is how you related to your audience. I think we all remember when we were little running around as much as possible on a dry barren day trying to get our kites off the ground. The samurai jack style also was a good choice, and the POV shot of the kite reminds me of something Hayao Miyazaki would attempt.

The morale of the story also has me intrigued, as the kite flying away could represent growing up or a loss of innocence, or the willingness to let something go. I am curious to what your interpretation of it was when you were animating this story.

I am actually very surprised that this didn't win a weekly award, and I think this should be up for a tanky at the end of the year. Great Job and hope to see much more from you :D

[Our Dreams]

nice little flash

I always throw my support behind flashes that aren't the highest of artistic merit drawing wise if the story has been given honest thought. The drawing wasn't even half bad either, but u may wanna work on ur lady drawings a bit.

I had to dock u 2 marks however because although the story was awesome, it has been done before on ng right down to the flying machine in a few different flashes (then again, dont worry, there are a billion Mario flashes out there).

8/10 5/5

PIED3 responds:

Glad you liked, yeah the ladies arent my speciality in drawing (in life on the other hand...) And ive been working on anatomy since i finished this so expect my next animation to have good story AND good art :) Thanks for the review!

[Luigi's Castle Calamity]

Great

It is a rip off of course, but its a GOOD rip off. Its not like you went out and insulted the original author with a poorly animated flash. U did exceed the original in animation smoothness and techincality. But you can never beat the original of anything. 10/10 5/5 regardless :D

JosephAS1 responds:

YA PAL! JEREMY SIMS'S "MARIO'S CASTLE CALAMITY" WILL ALWAYS BE THE FIRST!

[Cheese Acapella loop]

Y DID U NOT EXPECT 9 VOTES OF 5?

ITS A SONG ABOUT CHEESE GOD DAMMIT :D

Stalagmite responds:

i bow down to the randomicity and obscure expectations of the fellow audio portal users...
:D thank you so much for the visit! :D thanks hehe.

[missJack / Malika B's Dem]

Good Job

Ill keep u in mind for future VA parts :)

[car]

ok then

It sounded good at the start but then u added pitch changes which messed it up kinda. Then the random noise gives it the kiss of death. Use similar loops next time, and use Pitch changes only if u know ur progressions

PJ

[Holy Hell]

SATAN

GET DOWN FROM THAT LEDGE, YOU'RE GONNA HURT YOURSELF IF YOU FALL.

Oney responds:

its k he wearin knee pads

[Awesome-Soup]

Dude!

You should come up with captions for those new Rickard's commercials. "Its like taking the best day of your life, condensing it into a rock, throwing at someone you don't like, conquer the world AND THEN put it in your mouth"

But yeah. Awesome :D

[NG_Timmy]

TIMMY LOOKS LIKE....

OBEEEE WAAAAAAN KENOOOBEEEEEEEE :D

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